Topdrawer's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Love- A Story]

Very Nice!

Good work!
I'm pleased to see you getting so many well-deserved positive reviews.
Perhaps your warning in the author's comments not to watch the movie "if you are not into love stories" was heeded by those who seem to come to NG for a daily dose of weapons, explosions, splattered blood and stupidity. I will be watching for your next creation.

[The Little Girl]

Very impressive!

Another beautiflly crafted movie.
A refreshing relief from so much mindless gore and violence.
My compliments to you!

[Roadkill and Juliet]

clever & original!

Its interesting to me that there are so few female contributors to NG, and yet every movie I've by a female author has been generally better than most of the stuff on the site.

You've got what a lot of people are lacking: IMAGINATION.

Keep working on developing your individual style and you will go far.

[Where do clams come from]

Imaginative, unique!

As I've said before, The ballot should include another category: IMAGINATION.
Very well done.

[Sumo the Bamboo man]

Impressive color!

You obviously understand color and how to use it. It can be seen in your other NG submissions. Its a quality rarely seen outside professional studios.

[Safety At work.]

Nothing beats a good idea!

Clever, original, and funny!

Only one very small criticism:
Your characters' walk cycle is wrong. When a figure is walking, the arms swing in opposite direction from the legs. When the left leg is extended forward, the left arm extends backward and visa versa. Not a big deal, and it should be easy to fix.

["The Fox and the Mirrior"]

Beautiful!

You obviously have considerable drawing skill. The loose, sketchy style of this piece is very appealing. I will be watching for more of your work!

[Glurk!]

Nice job for just one week's work!

Well designed and nicely paced. Short, simple, and funny!

jerbjpg responds:

thank you very muchly!

[s.i.n::seed hunter ep [1]]

A couple of suggestions

1. Improve your knowledge of anatomy and your drawing skills.
Distrortion and stylization are fine, but should be intentional, not just poor drawing.
2. Include voices for your characters. It would substantially improve this movie.
3. Fooling around with text, having titles blur and shake, can be annoying. There are times
when type manipulation is effective, but in most cases it's better to keep things simple.